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Simply Simplified Journey of My life!

I am a girl!!!

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I am a girl… just got out my teens..
Who never thought.. how life been.
I want to love.. being with my friends
Enjoying great laughter.. and talking non sense.

I want to fly… just like kites in the sky
Daring to touch the blue skies… ignoring without wings how can I fly
I want to climb those high mountains…without knowing the heights
Dreaming to dive deep into the ocean… keeping all the fear aside

I like to dance in the rain… without caring about cough and cold.
Want to see rainbow…. and experience difference in the colors
I want to go outside… exploring this beautiful earth and meeting charming people
Saying good bye to boundaries… and keeping worries inside

I want to behave like a kid…. Without knowing how much old I am
Sleeping even after the sunrise… keeping alarm on and awaking all the people at the same time
I want to sit on papa’s lap… and remember my childhood days
Finding tears in my eyes… whenever I see any kid gonna cry

I see myself in the mirror…and think like a beauty queen
Want to look like a princess… and dressed like cindrella
I want to be become like Barbie doll… dressing as a princess and searching for the prince
Dreaming about someone day and night… not knowing when he will come and take me out

I want to meet santa clause…without knowing in which birth he will come and meet me so close
Enjoying always… and brining smile on others face.
I want to be like fairy tales… and use their magical powers
Help in nourishing others dream…. And bringing prosperity in everyone’s dream

Written by: Ankit Khandelwal

Special thanks to Arpita Khandelwal for providing idea and first 3 lines  and Sara Diaz for motivating me for bringing it in limelight.

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Written by enlighting

August 27, 2010 at 9:42 pm

Posted in Uncategorized

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  1. Good Work Dude..kahan se uadaya hai :) ..
    itna acha laga ki pura professional wala lag raha hai..

    Praveen Kumar

    August 28, 2010 at 1:18 am

  2. @ Praveen
    Its my own work :) Thanks!! You will see a lot like this in coming days.

    enlighting

    August 28, 2010 at 8:04 am

  3. Not bad….but I somehow feel thoda aur refine kar sakte hai, but keep up the good work.

    Deepika

    August 28, 2010 at 8:56 am

  4. mast hai bahi.aap tho badiya writer ban gayey hoo.

    ankur

    August 28, 2010 at 9:22 am

  5. @ Deepika
    I also felt that it could be improve.. but it was written very long back(Around 3 years or so), and I dont have track of my thoughts of that time :D , so its original version :)

    Thanks for your praiseworthy comments, I will keep them in mind during my future works.

    enlighting

    August 28, 2010 at 9:29 am

  6. @Ankur
    Na na na bhai.. its just an hobby.

    enlighting

    August 28, 2010 at 9:29 am

  7. and u r back, nice poem really sweet :)

    Atreyi

    August 28, 2010 at 12:33 pm

  8. @ Atreyi
    Yeah, the first phase of writing was not so good. But I hope this time i will be able to write better.

    enlighting

    August 28, 2010 at 4:35 pm

  9. vry nice…

    sanchali

    August 28, 2010 at 6:18 pm

  10. bru, poem bhaut achi lagi……………..
    tum kab se likhne lag gaye yar…..
    tum sab kuch kar sakte ho …..I think

    Ruchika

    August 28, 2010 at 6:32 pm

  11. @ sanchali
    Thanks.

    enlighting

    August 28, 2010 at 6:35 pm

  12. @Ruchika
    Thanks sister. He he, I am writing from may be from 4 years :) But never made my work public like this.
    Na na na.. its just an hobby. I am still a human not a robot :D .

    enlighting

    August 28, 2010 at 6:36 pm


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